Preliminary Task

Feedback from R1-16

-We really liked the opening logo, the music fit well and it looked professional. Although the font could have been a bit bigger because it was hard to read.
-We thought that the distinguishing of groups was good and helped show the genre.
-The CCTV effect was really interesting and added a multidimention.
-Some of the shots went on for a while and were a bit boring with just walking.

Feedback from R1-17

- We preferred the old sound track, when you ran round the corner towards the other group of boys as you ran to the beat.
- Like the pan.
- Good cctv footage, clever how it zooms and is in black and white.

FeedBack from R1 15

Logo is impressive
Music is good it creates a good atmosphere and builds tension
The CCTV camera shot from high really works
Could of possibly worked on the titles a bit more :)

Feedback

Music was fairly good in the piece and worked well.
Costumes were good and looked like football hooligans.
Prop of the bottle being thrown is good and looks realistic.
Good effect for CCTV.
Maybe needed some better acting as some are smiling a lot.

Final Piece

Group photo - end of filming

Video Criteria

Holding a shot steady, where appropriate.

Framing a shot, including & excluding elements as appropriate.

Using a variety of appropriate shot distances.

Shooting material appropriate to the task set.

Selecting mise en scene including colour, lighting, objects & setting.

Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer.

Using titles appropriately.

Response to feedback

The first thing we are going to do is sort the music out.

We did have a soundtrack but it didn't really fit in with the action so were having to make a new one.

Another thing we will do is try and make the action look smoother, it's a bit jumpy at the moment so hopefully after a bit of editing it will look better.

We are also thinking about having a voice over at the end but this hasn't been confirmed yet.

We need to finish off our titles as well.

 

Feedback

We recieved feedback off of everyone in the group & this is what we were told.

Mise en scene - 

Realistic, trying to represent classical ghetto scene.

Costumes are like normal football firm costumes. Stereotypical.

Location pretty good.

Camerawork - 

Successful establishing and angle shots.

Would be good to have the time and date on the CCTV footage.

Is the street name supposed supposed to be blurry?

Good point of view shots, fast moving, suits genre.

Editing -

Elements of CCTV is very good.

Realistic.

Sound -

Fast & energetic which represents fight scene.

Good music but a bit jumpy.

Generic -

British Social Realist Drama