Teacher Feedback

Your blog is already looking much better than your last group blog and there is evidence of significant improvement in your work. Your blog than analyses the sequence from Green Street in detail will enhance your blog, you also need to include an analysis of an opening sequence by all group members, there is currently only one.
Josh, Alex and Will all need to write up a full analysis of an opening sequence. You also need to give a fuller explanation of your idea, a detailed shot list will help with this.
Great work so far, well done.